I'm afraid i can't see barely any makeup in those pics apart from a little lilac liner? I don't think the pics themselves are terribly bad or anything but maybe try taking some pics with your eyes closed to show the makeup that's on the eyelids?
I'm sorry to say that I also can't see much through the blurriness of the first one and the flash from the 2nd! lol My camera has a setting for when I take pictures up close (I think it's 28 inches and closer) and for me that really helps. HTH