first fotd. constructive critisizim please.

[breathless]

first fotd posted, anywhere. so, this is posted almost everywhere. i need tips to help me improve. expecially with my eyes. they are uneven. i've had multiple eye surgeries [lazy eyes]. oh. and it looks like my lip gloss is messed up. i just got done brushing my teeth with cinnamon toothpaste. if any of it touches my face, it reddens it for a few minutes. ha! sooo ...anything you have to say, go for it. so here it goes *nervous butterflies*

foundation:
cover girl clean makeup - ivory

mascara:
n.y.c. thickening mascara - black

eyeliner:
e.l.f. - noire

eyeshadow:
m.a.c - swish
milani - garden mist
milani - moonlight

lipgloss:
urban decay xxxslick - wicked

thats it. i'm not scared of any hate.

 

[MACGoddess]

lol I just told you on the other site, and I'll say it again! GORGEOUS!

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by MACGoddess lol I just told you on the other site, and I'll say it again! GORGEOUS!

oh ha! thats awesome! i submitted this everywhere. im such a dork!

 

[Sanne]

hey breathless!!
I love the colors you used, and if you want contructive critisizim: I personally think that you need to tweeze you brows a little more, and model them with e/b gel.

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by Sanne hey breathless!! I love the colors you used, and if you want contructive critisizim: I personally think that you need to tweeze you brows a little more, and model them with e/b gel.

okay. thank you. i want to do a wax, to shape them. first, i'll do a tweeze. see how that turns out. =] thank you for your input!

 

[Hikaru-chan]

Very nice.

 

[thoxxa]

Looks realy great! Nice job

 

[GlamDazzled]

eee! that pink is so nice.

what other makeup sites did u submit ur pics on?

 

[jess98765]

Great job!! you are really pretty! i agree with sanne as well, and another thing that may help your eyes pop even more; i suggest that you blend in a darker pink in there too to give that contrast.... just a suggestion

Anywayz, keep it up- keep positng more FOTD's up!

 

[user4]

pinks look really nice on u. i agree with sanne (even though i should be tha last to talk about brows right now). would wait and get them waxed though (if u have never tweezed)... what i do is i get them waxed (well threded) and then i maintain by tweezing (or try to) because i suck at tweezing them into shape... i like what you did with the pink, you may want to add a bit of a darker crease color... not like super dark, but just to define it a little more... looking forward to more posts... u got a great starting point... and u have a great canvas to work with

 

[Sanne]

I just read your text above again, I now I saw that you want feedback to help even out you eyes.

from my point of view your upper lashlines are even, it's the lower lashline that's not. Lining your lower lashline with a black khol pencil is making it worse, maybe you can try not to line the lower lashline, and apply your e/s on the lower lashline only on the inner 1/3. for short, focus the attention on your strong features, instead of your weaker ones. HTH!

 

[Jennifer Mcfly]

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Originally Posted by Sanne I just read your text above again, I now I saw that you want feedback to help even out you eyes. from my point of view your upper lashlines are even, it's the lower lashline that's not. Lining your lower lashline with a black khol pencil is making it worse, maybe you can try not to line the lower lashline, and apply your e/s on the lower lashline only on the inner 1/3. for short, focus the attention on your strong features, instead of your weaker ones. HTH!

I agree, I thought the black eyeliner was a little harsh. Maybe try a thinner line, or maybe a charcoal color or even deep brown eyeliner. The pink looks pretty, and the only thing I can say is work on the eyelining technique. It's a good start, keep it up!!

 

[user3]

I agree about the brows but the makeup is lovely!!!!!!!!!

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by GlamDazzled eee! that pink is so nice. what other makeup sites did u submit ur pics on?

makeup talk forums & myspace.

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by jess98765 Great job!! you are really pretty! i agree with sanne as well, and another thing that may help your eyes pop even more; i suggest that you blend in a darker pink in there too to give that contrast.... just a suggestion Anywayz, keep it up- keep positng more FOTD's up!

perfect! thank you for your suggestion! i'll try that one out =]

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by sxychika1014 pinks look really nice on u. i agree with sanne (even though i should be tha last to talk about brows right now). would wait and get them waxed though (if u have never tweezed)... what i do is i get them waxed (well threded) and then i maintain by tweezing (or try to) because i suck at tweezing them into shape... i like what you did with the pink, you may want to add a bit of a darker crease color... not like super dark, but just to define it a little more... looking forward to more posts... u got a great starting point... and u have a great canvas to work with

aww! thank you darling! i actually did a tweeze last night. i was up and bouncing off the walls. i'm so hyper! took me like, almost 2 hours. but, i got them a BIT more shaped up. i'll post pictures later on to see if its better.
ooh! and a darker crease? awesome! thank you for your suggestion!

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by Sanne I just read your text above again, I now I saw that you want feedback to help even out you eyes. from my point of view your upper lashlines are even, it's the lower lashline that's not. Lining your lower lashline with a black khol pencil is making it worse, maybe you can try not to line the lower lashline, and apply your e/s on the lower lashline only on the inner 1/3. for short, focus the attention on your strong features, instead of your weaker ones. HTH!

are you serious? thats an awesome idea! i'll try that one out today!!! thank you very muuch!

 

[breathless]

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Originally Posted by Jennifer Mcfly I agree, I thought the black eyeliner was a little harsh. Maybe try a thinner line, or maybe a charcoal color or even deep brown eyeliner. The pink looks pretty, and the only thing I can say is work on the eyelining technique. It's a good start, keep it up!!

thank you. i only have black eyeliner. i can purchase some other colors. i never though other colors would look better. i've always done liner in black. but, i love your idea! thank you!

 

[user4]

cool, cant wait to see the new pics!!!

 

[Glitziegal]

Hi, Nice to meet you

I like what you've done very much. They are very pretty colours on you. My one recommendation would be to add a touch of blush. It's amazing what a difference a bit of blush makes.
Look forward to seeing more FOTD's.