Hi there and welcome.
I like this combo of sushi flower and chrome yellow. It's blended quite nicely. I think I'll try it this weekend!
I have a few suggestions though. I am no expert, these are just my two cents.
1) I think the look would benefit from a highlight color on your browbone. Since the colors you used are quite bright, a pale neutral is all you would need, nothing too flashy. Something like Naked Lunch, Phloof, or ricepaper. If you blend it into the crease colors, it will make the look really pro.
2) Some charcoal or black eyeliner on the top lashline would make your already awesome lashes look even better.
3) It might be the flash or lighting so this may not be applicable, but just a touch more cheek color would look nice. Since you do have a bright eye, you definitely don't want to go overboard on the blush either, its sometimes hard to balance it out.
Anyways, I look foreward to seeing more of your stuff. I'm pretty new here too and I find that everyone is so supportive and nice. No need to be intimidated.
