The colors are a bit high up..use a hilighter instead of the same color on the browbone.
Also, the wing can be thinner at the end..so it gradually gets thinner.
Luv the concept. I think jus a lil shorter on the wings you kinda went buck wit it girl.
What colors did you use?
I agree the highlighter is a bit distracting did you use a pigment and its just pickin up the light when the camera flashes?
Anyhoo I say A for effort I can see what you wanted it to look like