Littlepickle wants your artistic feedback! [Pic heavy]

[littlepickle]

Yes, I'm hassling you guys for uni project again! Sorry - but thank you so so much who responded to the other thread (power lipstick) it's helped ALOT!
Here are the two options for the final works I will be doing. I'd love it if you could please provide feedback! As many people as possible, write:

1. What you think the media used is
2. What you think the work is about
3. How successful you think the work is
4. Anything that could be improved about the work

Here's the first set:

A

B

C

D

E

And here's the second set:

F

G

H

I

J

K

L

M

N

O

P

Q

Thank you for taking the time out of your day to help me with this!

 

[TheTeenageMuse]

Okay.
I need forms of Media cause I'm not sure what that means..
I'm not quite sure I understand the soldiers but I get that the animals are struggling/dying. Covered in makeup so a product of our society? We're destroying them.
I think it's quite effective.

OH! I feel like the soldiers remind me of the ads for the Hurt Locker. Like the soldiers are pulled back to the war, everything is sugar coated. And It seems glamorous.

I think that the second theme is SO effective and I'm not sure how to improve the first. I don't know if i've been of any help. But it's 11:08 and I'm doing a nervous system project myself..hope i've been of ANY help.

 

[littlepickle]

Thank you very very much for your feedback! I really appreciate it

Sorry should have gotten out of the arty jargon - we get to talk like that and it's soooo pretentious! Lol. By forms of media I mean what have I used exactly? What do you think the substance the animals are covered in is? I want people to get it by themselves without me pointing with a big arrow going "LOOK THIS IS.... "

However it may be something you need to see the actual work for? Hmmm.