You application looks great to me so I can't really offer any constructive critism there.
The only thing I would do is take a Q-Tip and clean the area around the outer eye and cheekbones of any excess eyeshadow that might have fallen during application.
I would also suggest (since you have such striking eyes) is lining your inner rims with black kohl or the black fuidline.
Your skin is flawless and your eyebrows actually look REALLY good! HTHS