i agree with maybe bringing up the color more, you have space girl, work it! anddd, maybe a little more blending. i think to complete the look, gloss [clear or anything] would not hurt.
but anyway...how about blending the shadow a little more all over your eyelid? it looks like you only put a tiny bit on. don't be afraid to add multiple colors!
You're so cute! You do remind me of Michelle Branch. I like the eyeshadow, it's subtle, but I would definitely say that something on your lips (Aura Science makes a really good neutral lipgloss called Baby Plum that would look amazing on you) would make it much better, your lips seem dry otherwise.
as all the girls say you look gorgeous!! one thing id do for improve your look ten fold is filling in your brows... unbelievable how filling in brows can make a difference to a face
you are so pretty! and you have gorgeous beautiful hair! like others have suggested, maybe a little filling of the brow and bringing the shadow up. If you're unsure about how to do makeup for Asian/smaller eyes, check out the Tutorial section. There's some great step by steps! Practice makes perfect! Though you're already very pretty!