This is lovely, very soft and feminine but sultry, and it really emphasises your eyes lots. I love you in this look, it really works for you!
There are two tiny things I would try different next time: 1 - I think I would personally use just the black liner smudged out in the area under the eye rather than the silverish shadow (just personal taste but I think a smokey eye should have the area closest to the eye VERY dark, and the smokiness emanates up from that, kinda a fading out effect.... dunno, probably looks more "rockstar" like that I guess) - 2. - and I always think this when I see pics of folks smokey eyes - use an extra coat of mascara than what you would normally do to make them stand out more against the intensity of the other eye makeup.
HTH, Sho x