I think you did a beautiful job.
What I've found with the Metal X...they're great if you find their "niche".
Every new makeup you buy will have it's own properties. I've found that even within fluidlines, no two colors seem to function exactly the same. The Metal X collection is no exception.
So...this is what I've found.
Metal X works great as a base for other eyeshadows. This is assuming you have no oil on your eyelids and never have trouble with products creasing.
If you have oil and still want to use this as a base, use a trusty primer underneath it....and don't take it into your crease line. Take it just shy....and then blend up and into it. Use it lightly. And definitely warm up the Metal X-loaded brush next to a light bulb for a hot second.
Then put on the eyeshadow you want to layer over it and that should help the creasing. If you still have trouble making that work...try a light coat of powder over your trusty primer, before the light coat of Metal X.
Besides using Metal X as a base...it works great as an "accent". Especially once your eyeshadow look is nearly completed...and if you want that accent to appear somewhere other than near your crease. (Say...middle of the eyelid, or down by the lashline somewhere...).
Just keep it away from any places you know are known to crease product on you...and it'll probably work.
I /hate/ being disappointed with a product I was previously thrilled about. I hate wasting money, too. Or feeling like I wasted it. :::grrrr:::
A good rule of thumb when you're trying any new-to-you product: just get one first, to take it for a test drive. And when you do... Try to not make it do what you want it to do, and instead start to try to figure out how whatever /it/ /is/ can work for you.
Nora...I love your posts and spirit. You're beautiful, no matter what you're wearing!