There are a few suggestions I could make-but like many others said they are beautiful
To avoid the gap between the lashes and the liner maybe tighline the upper rim first then go on top with the liner above the lashes
Some of the looks are very shiney have you tried mixing textures? Such as Matte with Shiney or sheer with matte?
Also maybe use a big blush brush to blend all the colours together-they wont make it look wierd i promise! They will just help smooth some lines
Also this is just a issue i personally have (because I have deep set eyes) I dont like darker colors on my browbone (above with goldenair i guess?) only because I feel that eyes go deeper in the face. But thats just my opinion on that issue
also on the green one-and on some of the others i think there may be a feeling of irritation with how sloppy it looks on the inner corner (beautiful concept helps make it flow)
Maybe try to apply it wet so it doesnt have that little "drippage" i guess.
Geez im so full of critiques. Please know I'm only saying this cuz you asked for it
Greens look really pretty on you, so do purples. I dont see why you dont like them unless your just tired of it
But they are really pretty on you so is pink. Maybe try some blues those are always pretty and yellows. I would love to see you do a "sunset" eye with yellow and pink