I like the brown eye a lot, nice color combination. I can see how some of your technique was still developing, and I'm going to guess that you either weren't wearing foundation that day or put eyeshadow on after?
I also like the chromezone 1 look. I perhaps wouldn't do such a harsh line for the liner, although with your eyes being of such color as they morph, it's not bad for you. I particularly like the eye-lip pairing on that one. Application of the mascara after the look was completed would have completed it more elegantly- prevents the eyeshadow debris on the lashes, but like you said- developing technique still.
I actually wouldn't mind seeing you do tutorials for those two, I think they would be handy and that others would find them useful.